Do we need this black area? And green area? It looks weird and too much for me.
Too much information and everything is so big. How are we going to write down the letter?
Again, where is the place suppose to be write the letter, and why the logo is so big?
For me there is too much about logo, i can say 'ok' about replacement but less is more and for this one everything is too much.
Its always fine to add your letterhead some kind of abstarct reminders, just like green shapes all around. But i think is too much. Maybe not all over the 4 places but 2 or even maybe placed in 1 place is fine.
Why logo is that much big? And putting the same thing behind, its sooo boring.
I think its the 'best' in all of them. But still, its the best of the bad ones. Its boring , but with linings and giving information is okay.
WHY DO WE HAVE THAT MUCH INFORMATION?!
why that much thick line? ...
Not that i know 'TOO MUCH', but when i look at them it bothers me and i want to share it with you. You can leave comments if you would like to and we can discuss.
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